1: Issues
We discussed plagiarism on this unit. I had already known plagiarism because when I just entered this university,many professors told us not to do so. However,Peter should teach Kan about it if Kan really don’t know. If Kan does it many times,Peter should do his work.
2: Comments
1;Saki Yonemoto
She thinks effort is important key to be success,but the most important thing is continuation. She showed us the graphic which one person walks on the trainload and also took the story of “The Tortoise and the Hare”for example. When she was junior high school student,she went to cram school but she didn’t want to do. She got judgement “E”on test. Depressed the result,she tried to study harder every day. Finally,she got A and was able to pass the entrance exam which she wanted to go.
I agree with her thoughts which is making efforts plus continuation are her image of success. Continuation is the most important thing but it is the most difficult thing too. However,she did it so,I really admire her. I didn’t know there is a story about “Usagi to Kame”all over the world. This is easy to understand the importance of efforts.
2;Mio Kanaida
She told us the definition of success which is being famous and get reputations. However,successes she thinks are different from it. They are to achieve her dreams;living where she loves,living with her loving people and living with smile. She thinks living with smile is the most difficult because there are many difficulties and sad things in our life. To achieve,she study hard right now. Successful people work and hard.
Her dreams are wonderful. I also want to live with slime. I know to come true this dream,I have to study harder. After listening to her presentation,I realized what is success in life. Not money,not fame,it is living with smile.
3;Mako Ishibashi
She thinks the success is to accomplish the goals you set. It is difficult to explain her definition so she gave us example. For instance,she have big dream to trip where she wants to go. To come true this dream she has to save money by earning every month. It might be small things but,it accumulates,it will be big things. She thinks this is success. In her favorite movie,“If you want it,just keep doing it.”a scientist says.
The example she showed us was interesting. We have big dream and we are just in the middle of making efforts right now. However it may be hard,all we have to is doing our best. We may think what we do is waste but it will be connected to something in the future.
4;Kenya Shimpuku
He doesn’t know whether he is success or not because he is processing his journey,life. When we die,if we could say,“I was satisfied with my life. I was really happy.”It means you were successful. He has dream to travel all overseas the world. If he cannot come true his dream,there is no reason to be born in this world. He also introduced the words of Pelé,“Success is no accident. it is hard work,perseveration,learning,studying,sacrifice and most of all,love of what you are doing or learning todo.”
I could felt his passion for traveling all over the world. He has bid dream,that’s why he always study hard every day. To be success,the person who make us come true our dreams is only ourselves. We have to put effort to make them. At the end of his presentation,he said,“Enjoy your life.”I want to enjoy my life as he said.
3: My presentation
I talked about my experience at fist. I am really bat at math,science and Japanese. One subject I can get good grade is only English. When I was 2nd grade in junior high school,I realized English is my subject. Then I tried to take un test “英検”pre-second. My vocabulary was too bad to pass so,I decided to study for it. I was really busy because I had to go club activity,cram school and calligraphy school. There is no time to study! However,I found time I could study. It was before going to school. I usually got up 6 o’clock so I tried to get up 1 hour earlier. I could study for 1 hour for 3 months. It was really hard for me but I didn’t give up! Finally,I was able to pass. Through this experience,I learned efforts make good achievements. As I grew older,this lesson is not true. Even I made efforts,did my best,sometimes I can’t catch good grade or prize. However,I think making efforts is the best way to be successful. I might not get result,the attitude try to do something hard is success and important. Second,I found interesting article on the internet about what great people do. They write dairy,meditation,control our feelings,cherish time for oneself and patience. These 5 elements are effective to be successful. I was most interested in was meditation. A certain research shows meditation has a lot of advantages for mental and health. Meditation improves capacity to memorize and make more easy to sympathize. I had meditated when I was junior high school students before going home. I could feel clam and reflect what I did. That was good moments. I want to do them from now. By doing so,I hope my possibilities to be success will be improved.
You should have prepared some sheets which supported your presentation. I realized your assertion based on your experience, but you also said making efforts sometimes didn't reach goals or results. In your presentation, this point was added to the idea that making effort is the best way to be successful as just a explanation. However, I guessed it was an assertion mistakenly. Therefore, I want you to tell your assertion with supporting points.
ReplyDeleteYour success experiences was really great. I really respect you(; ;)In the presentation, you didn't prepare any visual resources, I think that visual resources are essential for presentation. it'll help you to tell us what you want to say more effectively. I want to listen to your presentation with visual resources.(^-^)
ReplyDeleteI think your presentation was really good, it was easy to understand. But you should have used some pictures, which helps us to give information more easily.
ReplyDeleteour speaking skill was great because I was so absorbed in your presentation. Then I think some materials will make your presentation better. Because if you had, we can understand easily and deeply. I hope this comment helps you.
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